Sunday, May 15, 2011

Formula Poem: Color Poem

There are many kinds of poem, namely formula poem, free-form poem, syllable and word count poem, rhyme verse poem, and model poem. The poem can be classified into some examples, such as if I were poem, color poem, haiku, diamante, limerick, clerihew, apology, and invitation. The following is the example of analysis of a formula poem: color poem

 Blue

Blue is the color of my wall,
I wore blue clothing to the mall.

Blue candy is what I love,
Why can’t be the color of a dove?

Blue hair would be fun,
But it wouldn’t look right in the sun.

I really love blue cars,
But I know I can’t take them to the stars.

So now you know I love the color blue,
Blue would be a good color for Elmer’s Glue.
Charles Boehm

The Title
Blue by Charles Boehm
Type of poem
Formula poem (color poem)
Paraphrase
The poet describes the beauty of life by deepening the meaning of blue through its dictionary meaning, that is sadness. The poet sharpens some sadness of life by using words like blue candy, blue hair, and blue cars. In short, the poet tells that in the sadness, there will be actually a wisdom.
Poetic devices
·  Rhyme  : Perfect rhyme → aa aa aa aa aa
·  Rhythm :
   Line 1   : Blue is / the co / lor of / my wall
                    Four feet/tetrameter: 
                       1st foot → trochaic
                        2nd, 3rd, and 4th feet → iambic
   Line 2   :  I wore / blue cloth / ing to / the mall
                    Four feet/tetrameter
                       1st, 3rd, and 4th feet → iambic
                       2nd foot → spondaic
   Line 3   :  Blue can / dy is what / I love
                    Three feet/trimeter
                       1st foot spondaic
                        2nd foot anapestic
                       3rd foot iambic
   Line 4   :  Why can’t/ be the / color / of  a dove?
                    Four feet/tetrameter
                       1st, 2nd, and 3rd feet trochaic
                       4th foot anapestic
   Line 5   :  Blue hair / would be fun
                    Two feet/dimeter
                       1st foot spondaic
                       2nd foot anapestic
   Line 6   :  But it / wouldn’t / look right /
                    in the sun
                    Four feet/tetrameter
                       1st and 2nd feet trochaic
                       3rd foot spondaic
                       4th foot anapestic
   Line 7   :  I real / ly love / blue cars
                    Three feet / trimeter
                       1st and 2nd feet iambic
                       3rd foot spondaic
   Line 8   :  But I / know I can’t / take them to / the stars
                    Four feet/tetrameter
                       1st foot Trochaic
                       2nd and 3rd feet dactylic
                       4th foot iambic
   Line 9   :  So now / you know / I love / the co / lor blue
                    Five feet / pentameter
                       1st foot spondaic
                       2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 5th feet iambic
   Line 10 :  Blue would / be a good / color / for El /
                     mer’s Glue
                     Five feet / pentameter
                       1st and 3rd feet trochaic
                       2nd foot anapestic
                       4th and 5th feet iambic
·  Alliteration : None
·  Onomatopoeia : None
·  Repetition : the word “blue”
·  Comparison : None
·  Imagery       : None
Kinds of stanza
·  Couplet because each stanza consists of two lines.
Style
·  The use of special diction, that is color. In this poem,
    it is blue.
Poetic diction
·  Denotation :
   Blue → sadness
·  Connotation:
   my wall inside
   the mall outside
   the sun → shiny
   the stars → glory
·  Allusion → Elmer’s glue
·  Parody : none
·  Ambiguity : none
·  Pun : none
·  Paradox : blue candy
·  Irony : none
Content
·  Theme : Wisdom to consider the sadness
·  Tone : Wise
·  Message : We should be wise to to face the sadness since inside it, there will be still a wisdom actually.
Comment
·  The color poem is very suitable for MTs students since it has simple words and consists important character building for the students’ future.

Analyzed by Abd. Gafur Yusuf, Indra, and Sumardi

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