Saturday, May 21, 2011

Model Poem: Acquainted with the Night

Supriyono, an English teacher from Malang, East Java, Indonesia, analyzes a model poem entitling Acquainted with the Night narrated by Robert Frost. He mentions that the poem is very suitable for MTs/SMP students because it can develop the students’ awareness about social life.

Acquainted with the Night

I have been one acquainted with the night.
I have walked out in rain—and back in rain.
I have out walked the furthest city light.

I have looked down the saddest city lane.
I have passed by the watch man on his beat
And dropped my eyes, unwilling to explain.

I have stood still and stopped the sound of feet
When far away an interrupted cry
Came over houses from another street,

But not to call me back or say good-by;
And further still at an unearthly height,
One luminary clock against the sky

Proclaimed the time was neither wrong nor right.
I have been one acquainted with the night.
                                                                  The Narrator: Robert Frost

The Title
Acquainted with the Night
Type of poem
Model Poem
Paraphrase
The narrator’s isolation and sadness are conveyed in this poem. He reports looking down sad lanes and averting his eyes from those of a night watchman. He stops walking to hear more clearly a distant cry that reaches him from some street away. The cry he hears is not aimed at him. The narrator is not called back or acknowledged with a farewell. He describes a clock against the night sky. It may be literally a clock in a tower or the full moon overhead. But, the clock does not say anything good or bad about the time.
Poetic devices
·   Rhyme  : Terza rhyme (a pattern of interlocking end-rhyme that follows the pattern) → aba aba aba aba aa
·   Rhythm :
    Line 1   : I have/ been one/ acquaint/ ed with/ the night
                   Five feet /pentameter: 
                        1st, 2nd, 4th, and 5th feet → iambic
                        3rd foot → spondaic
    Line 2   :  I have/ walked out/ in rain/ – and back/ in rain
                   Five feet/pentameter
                        1st, 3rd, 4th, and 5th feet → iambic
                        2nd foot → dactylic
    Line 3   :  I have/ out walk/ ed the furth/ est ci/ ty light
                   Five feet/pentameter
                        1st, 3rd, and 5th feet → iambic
                        2nd foot spondaic
                        3rd foot anapestic
    Line 4   :  I have/ look down/ the sad/ dest ci/ ty lane
                   Five feet/pentameter
                         1st, 3rd, 4th, and 5th feet → iambic
                        2nd foot dactylic
    Line 5   :  I have/ passed by/ the watch/ man on/ his beat
                   Five feet/pentameter
                        1st, 3rd, and 5th feet → iambic
                        2nd foot dactylic
                        4th foot → trochaic
    Line 6   :  And drop/ ped my eyes,/ unwilling/ to ex/ plain
                   Five feet/pentameter
                        1st and 4rd feet iambic
                        2nd foot anapestic
                        3rd foot dactylic
                        5th foot → trochaic
    Line 7   :  I have/ stood still/ and stop/ ped the sound/ of feet
                   Five feet / pentameter
                        1st, 3rd and 5th feet iambic
                        2nd foot spondaic
                        4th foot → anapestic
    Line 8   :  When far/ away an in/ terrupt/ ed cry
                   Four feet/tetrameter
                        1st, 3rd, and 4th  feet → iambic
                        2nd foot → anapestic
    Line 9   :  Came over/ houses from/ another/ street
                   Four feet / tetrameter
                        1st, 2nd, and 3rd feet → dactylic
                        4th foot → trochaic
    Line 10 :  But not/ to call/ me back/ or say/ good by
                   Five feet / pentameter
                        1st and 5th feet trochaic
                        2nd, 3rd, and 4th feet → iambic
    Line 11 :  And furth/ er still/ at an unearth/ ly height
                   Four feet / tetrameter
                        1st and 2nd feet → iambic
                        3rd and 4th feet → anapestic
    Line 12 :  One lu/ mina/ ry clock/ against/ the sky
                   Five feet / pentameter
                        1st foot → trochaic
                        2nd, 3rd, 4th and 5th feet → iambic
    Line 13 :  Proclaimed the time was neither wrong nor right
                   Five feet / pentameter
                        1st, 3rd, 4th and 5th feet iambic
                        2nd foot → anapestic
    Line 14 :   I have/ been one/ acquaint/ ed with/ the night
                   Five feet /pentameter: 
                        1st, 2nd, 4th, and 5th feet → iambic
                        3rd foot → spondaic
·   Alliteration : None
·   Simile : none
·   Metaphor : none
·   Onomatopoeia : None
·   Personification : none
·   Hyperbole : none
·   Oxymoron : none
Kinds of stanza
·   Sonnet because the poem consists of fourteen lines.
Style
·   The use of special present perfect tense to tell the readers that it has just happened.
Poetic diction
·   Allusion : none
·   Parody : none
·   Ambiguity : One luminary clock against the sky (line 12)
    It may be literally a clock in a tower or the full moon overhead.
·   Pun : none
·   Paradox : none
·   Irony : none
Content
·  Theme : alienation (a sense of being alone from human relationship and social connection) and depression (a mental condition characterized by loss of interest, lack of energy enthusiasm, a sense of flatness, and disrupted sleep pattern).
·  Tone : alone and depressive
·  Message : We should care of one another in our social life. It can be seen from the suggestion in the poem that the narrator is not only the person who feels disconnected from others. The cry that comes across the lane suggests another person is suffering too, is calling for connection.
Comment
·  The model poem is very suitable for MTs students because it can develop the students’ awareness about social life.

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